FIRST PAGE: What I like: - It's packed. - I like how the profiles have been layed out. - Images are clear.
What could be improved: - Picture in bottom left is slightly blurred? :< - I think the font for the title EXCLUSIVE is to bland. Magazines use more interesting fonts which make it more professional.
SECOND PAGE: What I like: - I like the idea putting another band on the right. - I like the range of images you have used. Where they are working. - Everything is readable.
What could be improved: - Some of the interview text is out of the boxes and looks unprofessional.
The first page, i think looks very good, the font is readable and you have a good balance of text and images. The text is laid out well and it gives the page a professional look. I like the red masthead, it stands out and gives the page that variation which keeps the page from looking bland. To improve on it i would make the second profile picture lighter so it matches the rest of the profile images and the bottom left pic is a tad blurry.
The second page i think isn't as good as the first page, i don't particularly like the red and grey boxes, i don't think they fit in with the rest of the page. I like that you've put a little sub-section to give the page a bit of depth and have another story.
Overall i think it looks very professional and i like it.
There are no gaps atall, which is great. I think it looks attractive and loud, but I don't think it looks too busy. I think the colours are suitable and also suit the text and fonts you havwe used. Lastly I also think the images are placed really well, and are strong images.
FIRST PAGE:
ReplyDeleteWhat I like:
- It's packed.
- I like how the profiles have been layed out.
- Images are clear.
What could be improved:
- Picture in bottom left is slightly blurred? :<
- I think the font for the title EXCLUSIVE is to bland. Magazines use more interesting fonts which make it more professional.
SECOND PAGE:
What I like:
- I like the idea putting another band on the right.
- I like the range of images you have used. Where they are working.
- Everything is readable.
What could be improved:
- Some of the interview text is out of the boxes and looks unprofessional.
Its really filled out theres no gaps. Images are strong and clear.
ReplyDeleteI like how its laid out and you can read everything really clearly.
eally like the colur scheme and the font u have chosen, hardly any gap and is really clear and easy to read
ReplyDeleteThe first page, i think looks very good, the font is readable and you have a good balance of text and images. The text is laid out well and it gives the page a professional look. I like the red masthead, it stands out and gives the page that variation which keeps the page from looking bland.
ReplyDeleteTo improve on it i would make the second profile picture lighter so it matches the rest of the profile images and the bottom left pic is a tad blurry.
The second page i think isn't as good as the first page, i don't particularly like the red and grey boxes, i don't think they fit in with the rest of the page. I like that you've put a little sub-section to give the page a bit of depth and have another story.
Overall i think it looks very professional and i like it.
i like that the page is full but you have wrote over one of your images and cant really see it. the colours used work well.
ReplyDeleteThere are no gaps atall, which is great. I think it looks attractive and loud, but I don't think it looks too busy. I think the colours are suitable and also suit the text and fonts you havwe used. Lastly I also think the images are placed really well, and are strong images.
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